I Close My Eyes

Well, I did it. I took the writer's challenge at a blog that I have been lurking around for some time. I found this blog through Laura at Wellblog's place and have been enthralled ever since.

I have dabbled in poetry on and off. Written some invitations, cards, and even a few song lyrics (for fun) but have been hesitant to post any. (roaring lion? see below post)

With the encouragement of a friend, I decided to take the challenge on L.L.Barkat's blog, in a lesson on seeing. I chose a subject that is cherished, a memory that was real and something close to my heart. The beach. Many, many days were spent at the beach in the 12 years I lived on the Southern Virginia coast. The memories are real, and when..........

I close my eyes and I can still see
the beach.

The endless spans of water
Sometimes blue, green, or gray.

It moves
Gently and
Violently

Bubbles rise and falling forward.
On and on.

I close my eyes and I can still hear
the crash

Of tidal movement
As earth slowly spins

They thunder
Loud and
Soft
Over and over.

I close my eyes and I can still smell
the salt.

The sun warms the waters
Fills the air with sea fragrance.

I breathe
Sweet and
Salty.

In and out.

I close my eyes and I am free
in Him

His creation excites
The beauty serene

He provides
Thrill and

rest.

I close my eyes and trust.

Forever and ever.

For a lesson on seeing, visit L.L. Barkat and try her "close your eyes" challenge.

Photo by me